Wednesday, August 30, 2006

OPTICAL DELUSION

~I know this post may be a little too late for Independence Day... But that is a illusional endowment that we enjoy every day. I had written this poem as a comment for a couple of fellow bloggers. Thought I would post it today~


I walked past the corpses sacrificed in the name of fanaticism,
And the souls living a life of death in its terror,
I watched the law stripped naked by the symbols of corruption disguised in white.
I retched from the stench of poverty, the slums that have mushroomed on my belly.

I listened to the AIDS victims, homosexuals, transvestities crying out for acceptance.
I was deafened by the silence of women waiting to prove their worth.
I watched helplessly as soldiers died in the conspiracy of patriotism
And the spirits crumbled beneath the hand of casteism.

I have witnessed Pain of love, Ecstacy of grief, Sanctity of hatred and dubiety of happiness.
Yet cradling the hope of a better tomorrow in my womb,
I walked towards the tri-colour that symbolizes 6 decades of my freedom.

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

The sequel of Mein Aunty Ban Gayi would follow in the next post. Me tied down with loads and loads and loads of work... I have begun to see little numbers wih tiny wings floating around me grinning at me devilishly. Pray for me so that I have the strength to hold onto the remanents of sanity... ;))))

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57 Comments:

At August 31, 2006 2:55 AM, Blogger Aditi said...

Beautifully and aptly put...

 
At August 31, 2006 5:35 AM, Blogger priya said...

Wow!!!! That was really a dedication to the society.
Good one.

 
At August 31, 2006 6:11 AM, Blogger Dhanush said...

Nice one Rose. Happy Indepedence Day. A late one though ;)

 
At August 31, 2006 6:55 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

all the best for the number crunching :P

 
At August 31, 2006 7:10 AM, Blogger starscream said...

India in a nutshell...

 
At August 31, 2006 7:14 AM, Blogger aqua said...

Aree wah wah..

Was waitin for the Part-II!

Cheers!!

 
At August 31, 2006 7:34 AM, Blogger Rose said...

@ Aditi..

Danku!

@ Priya..

Yup, the Indian one esp.. :)

@ Dhanush..

Happy Independence Everyday.. ;)

@ Anonymous..

I THINK I know who you are.. Or do I????

@ Starscream..

U Bet! Although just the tip of a icy mountain..

@ Aqua..

Soon dear soon.. ;)))

..Me

 
At August 31, 2006 9:23 AM, Blogger anup.777 said...

Hey there buddy!!! ... All the very best with the shifting! ... U Where are ya off to???

 
At August 31, 2006 9:25 AM, Blogger anup.777 said...

Sorry Rose, that one was meant for Scribblez ... :)

I know what you're going thru ... am in the same boat rite now ... :(
seriously frustrating!!!

Hope u come out of this soon ... but what about me???? When will I get a life???? ... :)

 
At August 31, 2006 9:52 AM, Blogger Wanderer said...

i can see a ' Spirited soul' ....

 
At August 31, 2006 1:56 PM, Blogger starry nights said...

Beautiful and well written poem.really nice. thanks for sharing.

 
At August 31, 2006 3:48 PM, Blogger I love Munich said...

VERY DEEP!!
Don't allow those little winged numbers to rob you of your sanity - chase them away, they have no business to buzz around your head!
Sending you a hug and a BIG LOAD if strength!!! :)

 
At August 31, 2006 6:25 PM, Blogger Mosilager said...

That sums it all up with panache... I wish we could get internet and computing to the majority of our people so we could hear their voices too.

 
At August 31, 2006 9:16 PM, Blogger neermathalam said...

I have witnessed Pain of love, Ecstacy of grief, Sanctity of hatred and dubiety of happiness.
Yet cradling the hope of a better tomorrow in my womb,

u have gifted pen....wat else can i sa..amazingly put...
please do attempt more poems..
and keep the spark alive.
after the sad demise of DD..i feel evrybody is going to stop..dunnno why i think like tat..:)

 
At August 31, 2006 9:41 PM, Blogger deepsat said...

wow thats nice!!

;-))

 
At August 31, 2006 11:00 PM, Blogger Keshi said...

nicely said.

Keshi.

 
At August 31, 2006 11:47 PM, Blogger Seema said...

waw..really well put words on the real today of our country...with hopes for a better tomorrow..

 
At September 01, 2006 1:44 PM, Blogger ani said...

>------------:)------------<

 
At September 02, 2006 6:00 AM, Blogger Shitrint said...

"I was deafened by the silence of women waiting to prove their worth."

loved this line..says so much!

really nice poem rose!

 
At September 02, 2006 9:41 AM, Blogger Arjun Ramakrishnan said...

ha, when it comes to being a subject of poetry, no country can come even close to India...that was very patriotic of you to spare some time on the eve of I-Day and pen down these lines.

 
At September 02, 2006 12:05 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes u sure do ... damn thing logged me as anonymous :-x

sunmay

 
At September 03, 2006 7:54 AM, Blogger lash said...

Hmm... Impressive.. A finger short so cant write much

 
At September 03, 2006 7:59 AM, Blogger jac said...

My prayers...



...and this is my bye too.

 
At September 03, 2006 1:26 PM, Blogger Tejas said...

Nice! That summarizes all that ails India today. Plus hoping for a brighter tomorrow.

 
At September 03, 2006 4:03 PM, Blogger White Forest said...

fantastic lines there!

 
At September 04, 2006 11:54 AM, Blogger Diana said...

India defined in beautiful verses

 
At September 05, 2006 2:16 AM, Blogger Gulam Hasan said...

Beautiful, Sad but true!

 
At September 05, 2006 2:27 AM, Blogger Rose said...

@ Anup..

Dats up to you dear.. :)))

@ Wanderer..

Hmm... were u on spirit??? ;)

@ Starry Eyes..

Ummmmah!!! :)))

@ I love Muncih..

A warm hug coming from me too for the caring thought.. ~smiles~

@ Mosilager..

Oh yes.. Its imp to hear their voices.. Thats truly the sound of India..

@ Neermathalam..

Blushhhhhh... U spoil me wid al that praise.. :)))

..Me

 
At September 05, 2006 2:32 AM, Blogger Rose said...

@ Deepsat, Keshi, Seema..

Danku.. Danku.. Danku..

@ Ani..

;))))

@ Shitrint..

I like it too.. :)

@ Arjun..

Me not patriotic at al.. :)

@ Sunmay..

Hey.. I thot u were hibernating.. ~grin~

:D

..Me

 
At September 05, 2006 2:39 AM, Blogger Rose said...

@ Lash..

Nonsense!!! :)))

@ Jac..

Bye Jac.. Wil rem you always.. :)

@ Tejas..

Yup..

@ White Forest & Diana..

India is beautiful and fascinating.. :)

@ Gulam Hasan..

Yes.. Sad it is..

:(

..Me

 
At September 05, 2006 3:55 AM, Blogger aqua said...

Onashamsakal! :)

 
At September 05, 2006 8:58 AM, Blogger alex said...

The only thing we can wish for in abundance is HOPE!

 
At September 05, 2006 9:02 PM, Blogger Dr O2 said...

Indian independence is one of the most famous with a fantastic character. Every good thing comes at a price but this hard earned one has been unique & worthy.

 
At September 05, 2006 10:48 PM, Blogger b v n said...

"I watched helplessly as soldiers died in the conspiracy of patriotism
And the spirits crumbled beneath the hand of casteism." - that was eloquent and quite neatly done...great!!

and Happy Independence day to you too....some of us were mistakenly smiling around thinkin it was onam :))))

 
At September 06, 2006 5:25 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautiful...

= rich

 
At September 06, 2006 9:06 AM, Blogger Hip Grandma said...

lovely! words fail me.

 
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At September 08, 2006 3:04 AM, Blogger prishah007 said...

that really saddens me,we all know what is going on ,why not change it rather than just complain

 
At September 10, 2006 11:28 PM, Blogger Kappa said...

Hey rose,
Reading your poem is like an overdose
On a trance which hides the "Optical Delusion"
And lets one see clearly life and all its situations
drawing a line between the lovely, eccentric and inane
What's you real name?

 
At September 11, 2006 9:55 AM, Blogger hope and love said...

really good one..!!

 
At September 12, 2006 2:46 AM, Blogger amu (amrita) said...

writtenly poetically, very apt, very poignant...short and expressive

 
At September 12, 2006 3:50 AM, Blogger Prashant said...

This is awesome dear.....

 
At September 14, 2006 5:10 AM, Blogger Kishley said...

updates!!!

 
At September 14, 2006 5:23 AM, Blogger Arti Honrao said...

Well expressed!


GBU
Arti

 
At September 14, 2006 5:52 AM, Blogger Praveen said...

this is one amazing poem, hats off to you :). its sad but its very true.

 
At September 16, 2006 2:06 AM, Blogger I love Munich said...

Where aaaaare you?? MISSING YOU!!

 
At September 16, 2006 9:43 AM, Blogger anup.777 said...

Hey Rose ... :)
otri otri joli undo? :(

How r ya? Loads of work, still???

Come back soon!!!

Have a gr8 weekend!!!

 
At September 16, 2006 11:06 PM, Blogger Strictly for my friends said...

Very nice. Sad, but true depiction.

 
At September 19, 2006 10:26 PM, Blogger its me said...

hey!! everything ok, right? :)

 
At September 20, 2006 6:45 AM, Blogger Anshuman Ghosh said...

of all the things that are not well, the words "my country" still evokes an emotion inside me, which I cannot describe.

sheez there I go again...

 
At September 23, 2006 4:14 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey...where are you ? You know that your posts are sorely missed...right ?? Waiting eagerly. :)

 
At September 23, 2006 6:54 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi there. You know that you're being sorely missed, don't you ?? :) Please do post again soon. Waiting eagerly...

 
At September 25, 2006 11:53 PM, Anonymous Hari said...

Amazing one..

 
At September 26, 2006 12:53 AM, Blogger psychacid said...

Thanks.

Yes a few posts have been deleted.

I'm taking the blog off.

 
At September 26, 2006 12:58 AM, Blogger psychacid said...

Thanks.

Yes. The blog is probably going to be deleted.

 
At September 26, 2006 2:26 AM, Blogger psychacid said...

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At September 27, 2006 9:49 AM, Blogger Dr O2 said...

seems like I ain't the only hibernated blogger around!! Rose?? You there??

 

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